The spin syntax appears to be similar to the one Scrapebox uses.

The spin syntax appears to be similar to the one Scrapebox uses. 

{Cerebral vascular insufficiency is particularly common in the elderly. This can lead to impaired mental performance such as mood disturbance, short term memory loss and decreased alertness. This pill helps maintain blood flow to the brain and may enhance cognitive performance in healthy individuals|In the elderly, cerebral vascular insufficiency is particularly common. Mood disturbance, short term memory loss and decreased alertness are examples of impaired mental performance brought about by Cerebral vascular insufficiency. Help maintain blood flow to the brain with This pill and it may also enhance cognitive performance in healthy individuals |Cerebral vascular insufficiency is prevalent in the elderly. It has led to impaired mental performance such as mood disturbance, short term memory loss and decreased alertness. This pill will help maintain blood flow to the brain and it could enhance cognitive performance in healthy individuals}.

Rewrite Product Descriptions Twice (Long Term Work)

Hi,

I need someone to rewrite health product descriptions in a certain forman. This task is a little complicated. See example below.

***Sample from you required - see below***

Lower rates preferred (under $2). Manual timing per 1000 words.
This is a full time work opportunity.
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Example:

Original:
I love eating eggs in the morning.
I always have more energy when I do so.

Rewrite:
{I love eating eggs in the morning|The best thing in the morning is to eat eggs|Eggs are my favorite thing to eat in the morning}.
{I always have more energy when I do so|I always feel better after eating eggs as I feel more energy|The reason I like eating eggs first thing in the morning is because they give me energy}.

Original

This pill is a potent herbal formula specifically designed to assist blood flow and general circulation to the extremities, particularly the brian, hands and feet.

Rewrite
{This pill is a potent herbal formula specifically designed to assist blood flow and general circulation to the extremities, particularly the brian, hands and feet.|

This pill, a herbal formual by pill maker, has been designed specifically to aid general circulation, particularly to the hands, feet and brain.|This pill aids circulation to the extremities, particularly the brain, hands and feet. It is a herbal formulation.} 

I will explain in depth how to write in this format. Essentially it means rewriting each sentence twice.

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***MEDICAL LANGUAGE UNDERSTANDING PERFFERRED****

I have timed myself doing this and it takes 70m for 1000 words. You will need to agree to this time.

Note: medical/scientific terminology is not to be changed.

SAMPLE:
Please rewrite these sentences twice as part of your application.

Cerebral vascular insufficiency is particularly common in the elderly. This can lead to impaired mental performance such as mood disturbance, short term memory loss and decreased alertness.

This pill helps maintain blood flow to the brain and may enhance cognitive performance in healthy individuals.

Response/Cover Letter to Tweak web copy to create stronger calls to action

Tweak web copy to create stronger calls to action

You should have a strong marketing background and be able to create value propositions and persuasive content that speaks to the read not sales them and creates conversions based on trust. A business and or physiology background would you be useful. Someone that has learnt skills from copyhackers.com is the sort of person that can help.

Please provider and example of a landing page or an action based web site you have created copy for.

Response/Cover Letter

You say, "A business and or physiology background would you be useful." I do believe you meant "psychology", phisiology is something quite far removed from sales and does not make sense at all. Psychology makes more sense, in sales it has been used as a tool to direct a consumer to a desired end result and that is to buy. The site copyhackers.com must be something else, its mere mention indicates that you have been impressed by them and that a candidate that is under their tutelage is almost a sure thing for this job. I have bookmarked their site just in case, you were astounded by what they can do, so maybe I can learn a thing or two from them. You must have scrutinized them thoroughly to have mentioned their site on this ad. I would appreciate it if you can apply the same scrutiny and check out some sample work. If it passes your requirements maybe I can start tweaking that web copy. 

Please check out some sample work at any of the following sites:

http://normansodeskblog.blogspot.com/

http://odesk-writing-samples.blogspot.com/

http://my-recipe-repository.blogspot.com/ 

http://prepper-pupil.blogspot.com/

Thanks, 

Norman

Cover Letter for Virtual Assistant/Writer Wanted

I hope I can be the virtual assistant/writer who will assist you with some data input, research, short description writing, social media support, newsletter work and general administration tasks.
I am certainly honest and hard working and I am also able to communicate effectively in English. I am also motivated - providing for family drives me. I can be available on Skype at the work hours you require.
I am available for 10-15 hours per week.

"Questions for you:"
1. Please tell me about yourself and your background.  Where are you from? What is your education background? What are your interests?
I am a BPO professional and I have been going at it on my own here at oDesk for over 4 years. I am from Angeles City, Pampanga - a city in the main island of Luzon here in the Philippines. I am a college undergraduate who decided to start working instead of studying in a highly commercialized educational system. I have many interests, some of which are PC games, Naruto, documentaries, cooking and many more.
2. Please explain why I should hire you for this position over the other applicants?  There are many VAs to choose from so convince me that you are the right one for the job.
The only reason why you would hire me is if I can do the job required at a price you can afford or are willing to pay. I have the job requirements down but I have no clue if my hourly rate is acceptable. I would rather not convince you, instead you can make an informed decision based on the information that I have provided. Please look into these links for you to be better informed about me and what I can do or you can also check them out just to know more about me:
http://normansodeskblog.blogspot.com/
http://odesk-writing-samples.blogspot.com/
http://my-recipe-repository.blogspot.com/
http://prepper-pupil.blogspot.com/
3. What is your proposed rate of pay?
$6.67 per oDesk hour (including oDesk fee)
5. What hours are you available on skype?
I will make myself available on Skype on the working hours you dictate.
I apologize for the rather long cover letter but I needed to respond to every point and be as detail oriented as possible.
I can start immediately.
Thanks for your time,
Norman

Sample photos of my mom's products

Sample photos of my mom's products

Rewrite test

There is scientific evidence that short term creatine use can increase maximum power and performance in high-intensity anaerobic repetitive work (periods of work and rest) by 5 to 15%. This is mainly bouts of running/cycling sprints and multiple sets of low RM weightlifting. Single effort work shows an increase of 1 to 5%. This refers mainly to single sprints and single lifting of 1-2RM weights. However, some studies show no ergogenic effect at all. Studies in endurance athletes have been less than promising, most likely because these activities are sustained at a given intensity and thus do not allow for significant intra-exercise synthesis of additional creatine phosphate molecules. Ingesting creatine can increase the level of phosphocreatine in the muscles up to 20%. It must be noted creatine has no significant effect on aerobic endurance, though it will increase power during short sessions of high-intensity aerobic exercise


REWRITE

Creatinine use for short periods has been proven in scientific studies to cause an increase in anaerobic performance and provide maximum power  when utilized for workouts involving repetitive high-intensity routines like sprinting when running or cycling and when using weights. The increase varies between by 5-15% while for other exertions it can be between 1-5%. In a few studies it does not reflect any ergogenic effect and in the case of endurance athletes the indicate unflattering results. The explanation may have something to do with these activities requiring a sustained level of intensity that need no further synthesis of creatine phosphate molecules. Expect up to a 20% increase in phosphocreatine levels in your muscles when you ingest creatinine. Remember though that creatinine will not have big effect on aerobic endurance. Its strength is in short bursts of power in quick high-intensity workouts.